How to Annotate Sales Copy For the Win

Check out this Patreon exclusive video to see Sean and Luke break down and analyze copy for a live audience.

The Steps Described in the Video

1. Identify the idea and/or argument of the ad.

2. Identify the lead type, and try to think of why it was used.

Lead Types:

  • Story

  • Promise

  • Benefit/Promise

  • Proclamation

  • Problem/Solution

  • Direct Offer/Invitation

3. Identify Claims and the Proof that Support Those Claims.

Types of Proof:

  • Social proof (testimonials/endorsements)

  • Academic/Expert proof

  • Media & news proof.

  • Celebrities/Famous examples

  • Historical examples & analogues

  • Logical deductions

4. Identify Dimensionalizations

Dimensionalization: restating or reframing points, facts, or claims made in the copy

Types of Dimensionalization:

  • Evoke an emotion

  • Bring in personality

  • Add something that makes guru more credible, or claims more believable

  • Add sensory details

  • Add elements of fascination or intrigue

  • Bring in something timely or top of mind that relates

  • Reframe numbers to make them understandable or enticing

  • Bring in a new perspective

  • Tie in to a historical event or person

5. Identify pivot points, structural changes, sections, transitions, and how they function together

Section Types You Will Frequently Encounter In Sales Copy (Not all of these occur in every piece of sales copy):

  • Eyebrow copy

  • Headline

  • Deck copy

  • Pattern interrupt

  • Lead

  • Dis-qualification

  • Selling against alternatives

  • Cred/Bio

  • Benefits

  • Proof

  • Dimensionalizations

  • Analogies

  • Transitions

  • Aggravations of a problem

  • Testimonials/endorsements

  • Comparisons

  • Stories

  • Mechanism reveal

  • Pivot to offer

  • Scarcity/urgency justification

  • FAQs

  • Price anchor

  • Bonuses

  • Offer recap

  • Guarantee

  • Close

  • CTAs

  • P.S.

6. Identify What Makes The Offer:

  1. Superior to others

  2. Irresistible to prospects

  3. A no-brainer

7. Make Notes About the Design Elements and Choices

Questions to Ask Yourself:

  • Why was a chart or graphic clear?

  • What did it do to communicate and evoke emotions?

  • Why was a particular color palette used?

  • Was anything distracting, confusing, compelling?

8. If You Can Find This Information, Note response data, marketing context, traffic drivers that led to copy you’re reviewing